Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Firehouse !

Just then I heard a crackling sound.  What's that sound? Well it sure can't be my dad burning bay leaves. Then my sister screamed, " FIRE ! " After that everyone  got out of the house. My dad was in his shorts puting out the FIRE with the garden hose. 6 minutes later the I hear we oow we oow. Just then 3 fire trucks came.  One window was smashed and 4 chairs were broken because they were all charcoled.  Luckily everyone was okay.

By Cole
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6 comments:

  1. Room 8 Super StarsMay 15, 2009, 10:48:00 AM

    Hi Cole, I hope everyone was ok. Did anyone get hurt? From Robbie in Room 10

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  2. MattMay 15, 2009, 10:57:00 AM

    Hi Cole, I read your story. It was really cool. That must have been really scary. Were you scared? From Matt in Room 10.

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  3. sandieMay 15, 2009, 2:44:00 PM

    Hi Cole
    I really loved your story. You were so lucky that your house did not burn down. I look forward to seeing more of your work

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  4. Madeline Room 9May 15, 2009, 2:53:00 PM

    Hi Cole
    I liked the way you explained your recount. I also your description of the fire.

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  5. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn ScribblersMay 19, 2009, 12:25:00 PM

    Hi Cole, did you know that your house was burning down when you first woke up?
    from frederica.

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  6. AnonymousMay 28, 2009, 7:55:00 AM

    wow cole was it scary when your house chat on fire????????

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