Thursday, February 9, 2012

Mr Twit

Mr Twit is such nasty old hag!He's SOOO hairy and his beard has chunky bits of rotten egg in it.YUCK! He's also cruel to his wife too! What a BAD man, don't you think? Even his house doesn't have any windows,he thinks that windows are for people to look in!(Which is pretty silly!)They're actually to look of.                                    He's such a gross twit!                                                     


By Eli
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5 comments:

  1. HannahFeb 15, 2012, 7:19:00 PM

    I agree, he's such a dirty old hag. I think Mr Twit is disgusting.

    Hannah

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  2. KateFeb 15, 2012, 7:21:00 PM

    Hi Eli,

    I enjoyed reading your description. I liked you use used adjectives and exclamation marks which made your writing more interesting.

    Keep it up!
    Kate

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  3. little paper birdsFeb 15, 2012, 7:36:00 PM

    Hey Eli! I totally agree! That's an awesome description! I LOVE it!




    Mrs Twit :)

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  4. little paper birdsFeb 15, 2012, 7:50:00 PM

    Hey Eli! What an awesome description about Mrs Twit!





    Eli's Mum

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  5. RomyFeb 16, 2012, 5:48:00 PM

    I think he's yuck too.

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