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Friday, August 24, 2012
Sparkles in the sky
Pointing in allways showing only light Granting wishes during the night Floating next to the moon. In the dark night.
The first line of your poem blew me away Oliver. It is such an original viewpoint. Your poem talks to me about one star instead of many. And this star is quietly powerful, all-knowing and solitary. A pleasure to read, thanks for posting Oliver.
The first line of your poem blew me away Oliver. It is such an original viewpoint. Your poem talks to me about one star instead of many. And this star is quietly powerful, all-knowing and solitary. A pleasure to read, thanks for posting Oliver.
ReplyDeletehis is an exceptionally good poem as you have stung a number of clever little phrases together. The end is very appropriate to the body of the poem.
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem Oliver. Its good to see someone your age putting on a great poem on a blog.
ReplyDeleteBy Marley.