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Tuesday, September 20, 2011
Pass and run
Ball spinning
grass cutting
legs a tired
feet running
body flying- bang!!!
the balls out
still going
very tired
running hard
nearly there
even closer try!!!
By Luke
Hi There Luke I really loved your poem. The words you used made me feel like I was actually at a game watching someone pass and run. Well done. I look forward to reading some more poetry.
Hi There Luke
ReplyDeleteI really loved your poem. The words you used made me feel like I was actually at a game watching someone pass and run. Well done. I look forward to reading some more poetry.
Sandie
Hi Luke I really like how you write your poem about pass and run
ReplyDeleteWell done
Nice work Luke I really liked your poem did you do it by your self?
ReplyDeleteNice work Luke did you do it by your self
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