WALT use past tense and time connectives when writing recounts.
Power of One - a blog entry written by the whole class during guided reading time.
Yesterday we went to the Puriri Tree and watched the Power of One - a show about bullying.
Firstly the actors introduced themselves. They told us the rules and started the first scene. Next the actors acted out all the different types of bullying . After that the actors asked people from the audience to act out a scene about bullying.
Finally Filo got dressed up as a super hero and he revealed the Power of One Box.
We learned that there are lots of types of bullying and the power of one starts with us when we tell our parents or teacher if we are being bullied. We really enjoyed the show.
Please comment on our writing. We would love your feedback.
I liked the recount but wasn't sure who wrote it as I couldn't see a name for the author! I think that the show sounds really interesting and I like the way that you had both the photographs and the recount together! Will look forward to seeing more of your classroom work in 2010!
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Thanks for the comment and feedback. The whole class wrote the blog but we will remember to sign it next time.
ReplyDeleteDo you have a class blog? We would like to see yours one day too.
Enjoy the term !
Room 13
Hi Rm 13 My name is Alyciah and i'm from Hay Park School COOL robots you have keep up the good work
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wow rm 13 great writing
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paige and jade
Hi Room 13 its Paige from Grey Lynn School Auckland.
ReplyDeleteI loved your writing but I don't know who you are and some advice about the writing, the date it happened needs to be written so we know that it did not happen just yesterday. I loved the photos and I can't wait to see more.
From Paige your pal
Kia Ora Room 13 its Zeb From Room 11 GLS Wow awesome recount but dont know what day it was because every time I read it it says "yesterday" But anyway I love it.
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Hi room 13
ReplyDeleteWow awesome blog!!!
I love your scribble clock and the power of one show recount is really interesting and the pictures are great! Filo looked REALLY funny dressed as a super hero. Keep up the good work!
From Lucy Room 11 Grey Lynn School Auckland:)
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ReplyDeleteHi Room13,
ReplyDeleteI just read the power of one story and it was great because you told the main points.
From William Room11 G.L.S Auckland NZ
Thanks Room 11 for all the comments. We chose to write the word yesterday because the date appears at the top of our blog and we don't want to repeat ourselves. We did write that we are room 13 so people would know who we are. Your comments are thoughtful and welcomed.
ReplyDeleteI loved the writing it told a lot about the show I think it is very desciptive
ReplyDeletefrom Charlotte in rm 11 Grey Lynn Auckland NZ
Wonderful blog. Keep it up !
ReplyDeleteHi room 13, I love it how you did your Power of One which shows about bulling keep it up room 13. from Lovely
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ReplyDeletellove it the photos are awesome .
I hope you keep posting and telling us more
Paige RM 11 Gls
I just read your power of one recount it was great,how you only used the main points instead of keeping it long. Gus
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