Friday, March 24, 2017

ECR - Enchanted Chainsaw Rampage

Every Monday The Witty Wordsmiths, Anya, Evie, Torin and Olive, get a new story starter from the website FaboStory and then we're challenged to write the middle and end to the story. On Friday Andrea enters them into the writing competition and hopefully, one of us wins. 

Maureen is one of the Fabostory writers...

Maureen’s Story Starter (the story starter that was sent to us)

The school caretaker looked at the remains of his storage shed. “What a mess.” He shook his head. Scientists were calling it a localised earthquake. There was the heap of rubble in front of him.
Very localised, he thought. Just his shed.
The principal patted his arm. “I’m sorry. The insurance company is calling it an Act of God so they won’t pay out any money to help us rebuild it.”
“All my tools were in there,” the caretaker sighed. “The school tractor is under there and the mower…. All the paint and the pool chemicals are in there too….”
There was a slight shifting in the bricks and dirt then a slide of debris cascaded down.
The principal backed away quickly.
The caretaker stared in horror. “Oh no! I forgot I left….”
Anya's story starts here....
Finish the story here:: "my enchanted chainsaw in that broken shed!"shouted the caretaker."Oh no!The rocks are going to hit the button of the chainsaw!" exclaimed the principal. The caretaker smirked. "Mwuhahahaha!" laughed the caretaker .Then RIP!The caretaker ripped off his clothes .He was an evil scientist!"Evil Mc Glee's the name... enchanting things is my game. "Charmed Evil Mc Glee." Mr help me!"cried the principal."NO!" shouted Evil mc Glee."my chainsaw will kill you!" Suddenly the principal put his hand in front of him like he was using the force. The chainsaw went flying towards Evil mc Glee and it hit him! Evil mc Glee turned into a goat!?!"baaa baa ba baaa*" Baa-ed Evil Mc Glee. The goat ran away out of the school." Well no more caretaker, but only a goat"sighed the principal. "Should we turn the school into a petting zoo?" asked a kid who just came out of class. "Maybe so." replied the principal. The next day as you all know ,no more school but a new petting zoo.*you will pay for that.
By Anya

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

My fabo story

In room ten I have been getting story starters and I have to finish it. I have a group and we go into Andrea's office and do a brainstorm together and as a group we decide what we want in our story and then the next day we start writing. We only have a week to finish it so on Friday we give it to Andrea and we write it on the computer and then publish it. It then goes into a competition and the best story wins. On Monday we find out if we have won or not.
by Evie

Evie the Author


NEW  CLASSROOMS                                                                                                                              There are new classrooms and my class is moving in.  It is almost done and we are going to get new    furniture. I am very excited to move in. I think    it will be finished on April the 9th. We are so    excited to move in. By Nikhil

The best soccer players in the world

The best soccer players in the world.

The first is Messi and he plays for Barcelona. The 2nd best it is CR7. (Renaldo and he plays for Real Madrid) The 3rd best is  Griezmann who plays for Atletico Madrid. My favourite soccer is Paul Pogba.  He plays for Man City.  Who is favourite soccer player? By Sam 

Monday, March 20, 2017

How to be a ninja

How  to  be  a  ninja  

Step    1   Ninjas  are  silent   on   secret  missions.

Step  2   If    you  want  to  be   a  ninja    you  need   weapons. 

Step   3    You   need    a  suit.

Step  4    Find a  ninja   club . 

by  Sienna.

The Green Aliens and the Ninja. By Sienna

The new classes

At Grey Lynn school, Mr Barker wants the old classes to go to make room  for eight new classes. Mr Barker wants all the Kowhai classes to be knocked down and we are going to go up to the field. Soon then we are moving to the field. We are moving in term  two and that's this year. It's exciting. By Leo 

Building progress March 20th. 2017

Building progress March 20th. 2017

Poppy's Baby bird's Nest

Poppy holding the bird's nest.

At my nana's house my nana found a bird nest.And my mum had to go to Australia so my nana looked after me and my sister while my mum went to Australia.So when my mum was away me my nana and my sister watching TV we cut the bird nest out of the rose bush.Once we got it out we put in a box.when we went to go pick up my mum up I brought the bird nest with us.When my mum came out of the airport I showed her my bird nest my mum was surprised. She said WOW because she'd never ever seen a bird nest that big. And then we left and brought it to school.   

by Poppy

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