Room 13 is learning to change our writing from simple sentences to complex sentences.
We are also setting new writing goals.
Here is our first sentence we worked on together. Andrea said she cannot wait to read all our complex sentences now in our writing books.
The cat ran round the mat. - Simple sentence
The cat ran round the mat and then the dog chased the cat. - Compound sentence
The cat ran round the mat as fast as a cheetah and then the dog chased the cat but he was as slow as a snail, so the super fast cat won. -Complex sentence
Keep watching for our complex sentences and see our writing grow !
Hi Room 13,
ReplyDeleteThese are great examples of simple, compound and complex sentences. Using complex sentences makes your writing much more interesting. I look forward to reading examples of your new and improved writing!