Thursday, February 9, 2012

Mr Twit

Mr Twit is such nasty old hag!He's SOOO hairy and his beard has chunky bits of rotten egg in it.YUCK! He's also cruel to his wife too! What a BAD man, don't you think? Even his house doesn't have any windows,he thinks that windows are for people to look in!(Which is pretty silly!)They're actually to look of.                                    He's such a gross twit!                                                     


By Eli

5 comments:

  1. I agree, he's such a dirty old hag. I think Mr Twit is disgusting.

    Hannah

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  2. Hi Eli,

    I enjoyed reading your description. I liked you use used adjectives and exclamation marks which made your writing more interesting.

    Keep it up!
    Kate

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  3. Hey Eli! I totally agree! That's an awesome description! I LOVE it!




    Mrs Twit :)

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  4. Hey Eli! What an awesome description about Mrs Twit!





    Eli's Mum

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  5. I think he's yuck too.

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