First we talked about what a poem is. Here are some of our thoughts:
*entertainment *expressive writing *feelings*emotions*a really short story*a message to other people*showing our thoughts * the best writing *
Then we wrote a class poem together using a website called Read Write Think.
It helped us write our poem because it made us think of interesting words. It gave us topics to write about. It also gave us steps to work through. We brainstormed before we wrote because brainstorming gets our good ideas out of our head and onto paper. It also gives us a boost.
Here is our poem. We would love some feedback.
Now we are all busily writing our own. We will share them with you soon!
Room 14
Kia ora Room 14,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poem - your use of imagery made me picture the morning dew. Ka pai!
Awesome ideas of how you think in your minds what poems are we think the exact same!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was amazing.
From Arlo and Charlotte
Excellent collaborative effort. I look forward to your individual poems.
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ReplyDeleteI loved the imagery in your class poem. I am really looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
Sandie
Lovely poem Room14. I like the hard sounding "K" of "Crying Clouds" to start the poem with impact. Then the softer "Sssp" sound of "splashing" and "sparkling" which gave me a sense gentleness and beauty. Thank you for that, more please.
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