Wednesday, October 19, 2016

The Candy house and the Witch

Once there was a house made of candy. A little woman lived in it. The house had windows made of candy floss and the base of it was made of bubble gum. The walls were made of ginger bread and the door was m&m's. The woman wasn't just a normal woman, she was a witch! She was a very bad witch. Once two boys came along and they took some candy, put it in their pocket and knocked on the door. The boys said, "who is there?" The witch opened the door she and noticed that they took some candy. The boys names were Tom and James. The witch said, "come in," so the boys went in. But it was a trap. The boys fell into a cage. The cage went up above a pot. The witch laughed, "he he he I have got you now." "Oh no, what are you going to do to us?" said Tom and James. "I will turn you into zombies". "Ahhhhhh please don't!" said the boys. "I'll just lower your cage now.... bye bye." she said as the cage lowered. By Torin

3 comments:

  1. Hi Torin,
    What interesting writing, I enjoyed the end of your story as it left me thinking ahhhhhh! What will happen next? Will they escape.
    :) Courtney

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  2. Hi Torin,
    What interesting writing, I enjoyed the end of your story as it left me thinking ahhhhhh! What will happen next? Will they escape.
    :) Courtney

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  3. What a freaky story torin BUT I LIKE IT by TNIAS

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