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Friday, August 24, 2012
Glittering Wonder
Sparkling, glowing wonder in the sky Shining so bright you can hardly believe your eyes
What a twinkling surprise.
Thanks for posting you poem. It has a good, fast rhythm; which, combined with the words "sparkling", "surprise" and a nice big picture of a twinkling star, makes me feel so happy :) Well done.
Shining so bright you can hardly believe your eyes
Hi Alice,
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting you poem. It has a good, fast rhythm; which, combined with the words "sparkling", "surprise" and a nice big picture of a twinkling star, makes me feel so happy :) Well done.
Very good last phrase, what a twinkling surprise.
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