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Hi James. You touch on a number of good observations in your poem. And I see you have experimented with the idea that stars go "boo", its a really great image. You might also try slipping in exciting describing words. Describing words always sound great in poems. Thanks for posting James. I look forward to more.
I love your stars, James. And the way you describe them. There are billions, which is incredible when you think about it. It's almost impossible to make sense of it all - stars, and space, and the way they do look connected from down here, but are millions of miles apart. Really nice work. What a great class project. Love from your Dad.
Hi James. You touch on a number of good observations in your poem. And I see you have experimented with the idea that stars go "boo", its a really great image. You might also try slipping in exciting describing words. Describing words always sound great in poems. Thanks for posting James. I look forward to more.
ReplyDeleteGreat art work James.
ReplyDeleteI love your stars, James. And the way you describe them. There are billions, which is incredible when you think about it. It's almost impossible to make sense of it all - stars, and space, and the way they do look connected from down here, but are millions of miles apart. Really nice work. What a great class project. Love from your Dad.
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