Friday, August 24, 2012

Glowing Star

They are up so high they go boo!!!  
And then reform 
There are billions they're connected
But so far apart.

James

3 comments:

  1. Hi James. You touch on a number of good observations in your poem. And I see you have experimented with the idea that stars go "boo", its a really great image. You might also try slipping in exciting describing words. Describing words always sound great in poems. Thanks for posting James. I look forward to more.

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  2. Great art work James.

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  3. John (James's Dad)Sep 5, 2012, 11:24:00 PM

    I love your stars, James. And the way you describe them. There are billions, which is incredible when you think about it. It's almost impossible to make sense of it all - stars, and space, and the way they do look connected from down here, but are millions of miles apart. Really nice work. What a great class project. Love from your Dad.

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