Friday, August 24, 2012

I'm a star

I shine in the sky, I guide the under, guess...I'M A STAR.
by Phoenix



2 comments:

  1. Hi Phoenix,

    Every poem, long or short has merit. I really like the "I guide the under" and "guess ...". These sentences (or ideas) are truncated, a style which you could develop into your very own and become really famous. Please keep writing and thanks for posting.

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  2. Phoenix I am awfully proud of your work here. You are the star!!

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