Friday, August 24, 2012

Star Poem

A sparkling ornament in the sky
Up above the world so high
like five triangles and a diamond in the sky.

By Felix W


  1. Hi Felix,

    I see you have been inspired by "Twinkle, twinkle, little star". That's great Felix, it's an enduring rhyme and you can learn a lot from it. When you read your poem aloud, listen to the lovely rhythm in the rhyme. It's like being gently pushed on a swing. "Twinkle, twinkle" is a bedtime poem ... if you say Twinkle, twinkle out loud, does the rhythm make you feel sleepy?

  2. Yes, the word ornament got me. Another great word and poem.


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