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Monday, November 11, 2013
My Dad's New Work
My guided writing in 20 minutes.
On Saturday I went to my Dad's new work. He makes ads. It's a three storey. There's an electronic room. One time my Dad made an ad for Tip Top Ice Cream. It is awesome. By Weston
HI Weston, I liked how you told us how much you liked your dads ad. I liked how explained your dads job and what you liked about it. From Sasha & Imogen Room 7
Hi Weston,
ReplyDeleteI loved your story about your dads new work!
What is your favuorite add that he made!!!
By Ellie
Hi Weston. Tip top ice cream is your favourite. Me too. from Elizabeth
ReplyDeleteHI Weston,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told us how much you liked your dads ad.
I liked how explained your dads job and what you liked about it.
From Sasha & Imogen Room 7