Pass and run

Ball spinning
grass cutting
legs a tired
feet running
body flying-
bang!!!
the balls out
still going
very tired
running hard
nearly there
even closer
try!!!
By Luke

Hopping Broccoli !

We have been practising using persuasive language. We got to chose a fruit or vegetable and use our persuasive writing skills to make our creation sound the yummiest or be the most popular.


Here is Aum and Luke's creation - hopping broccoli.

Let's see if they have persuaded you to eat more broccoli!