Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Pass and run

Ball spinning
grass cutting
legs a tired
feet running
body flying-
bang!!!
the balls out
still going
very tired
running hard
nearly there
even closer
try!!!
By Luke

4 comments:

  1. Hi There Luke
    I really loved your poem. The words you used made me feel like I was actually at a game watching someone pass and run. Well done. I look forward to reading some more poetry.

    Sandie

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  2. Hi Luke I really like how you write your poem about pass and run
    Well done

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  3. Nice work Luke I really liked your poem did you do it by your self?

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  4. Nice work Luke did you do it by your self

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