Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Chapter 2 and 3 of my narrative

Chapter 2.

DUN dun dun....In another dimension on an Island, worms were shooting each other at worm zone - not with real weapons, but tanks and stuff like that.Then guys, I mean evil ninja looking guys came and destroyed the hole place with weapons tanks and stuff like that.They even destroyed the worm market.

Chapter 3.

A bunch of worm soldiers fierd back at the evil be contiued.
By Jeru

1 comment:

  1. What an excellent introduction "DUN dun dun ..." you had me on the edge of my seat!

    I like how you have chosen to publish only a portion of your story. Did you know that action-driven novels (stories that are fast paced about weapons, heroes and bad guys) are often split over three books? (trilogies) sometimes more. This helps with suspense, mystery and keeps readers begging for more.

    Keep writing!

    Jacqui (Mum to Felix Room5)


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